Dead Hyper Chapter one

Daz Revan
Dead Hyper Chapter One is my first gamebook. only a short chapter so take a look.

Advice would be appreciated. If you like the open chapter then more will be added. this is only the first draft so have a look and let me know what you think i can improve on.

thank you.

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