I was really interested to try this out, but after the intro, I'm not able to do anything. I can see a hallway with two doors, and I can turn the music on and off and click Help, but when I type something and hit the Enter button, nothing happens (the text is not even registered), and if I hit the Enter key instead, it just beeps at me. I also can't click on anything in the picture - not sure if you're supposed to be able to. I hope your demo was meant to be more than that...
Some thoughts, on the meager amount I saw:
1) A way to skip the opening sequence would be nice.
2) Something more full screen would be helpful. The font is soooo tiny...
3) On the first game screen, it's "dining room", not "dinning room".
Sorry. That's all I can offer.
Oh, I do like the music.