I've finally finished working on the first chapter of my thesis: http://play.textadventures.co.uk/v5/Play.aspx?id=1102

Tell me what you think?

Also, some of the people I've got to test it keep reporting errors with the links and stuff- none of which appear in the offline version. Is there some sort of syntax difference that's screwing things up? :O

The link is dead!

http://imgur.com/co5w2pL