My First Game- Mystery Box Of Awesome Adventure chapter 1

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My First Game- Mystery Box Of Awesome Adventure chapter 1

Postby kurto321 » Thu Jul 12, 2012 11:46 am

um....yeah, it's my first game...pretty simple gamebook that I made the other day and it can be found it the Fantasy category. Tell me what you think :) I've already got ideas for future chapters if people like this one :) suggestions always appreciated :D
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Re: My First Game- Mystery Box Of Awesome Adventure chapter

Postby tingtingminer » Tue Aug 07, 2012 11:36 pm

Wow, It's really great, but a bit easy. PLEASE MAKE THE SECOND PART!

Some suggestions :idea: : When the man you rescued asks you if he can travel with you, there should be an option. Also, when you are in the cabin with shale, and you can ask questions, when you click on How do I get home, there should be two options. Maybe

1. Wait! I still want to know more!
and
2. Go and see the empress.

Hope I helped, and a great adventure.

BTW. I love the font. :wink:
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